21 Jun 2005 12:58 pm
Can't go out there
Well, congrats to me! Comic number 1! Unfortunatly I barely tried and rushed it. Well, now its time to point out my mistakes.
Panel 1
Jenn's head is too big.
Panel 2
Jeff's legs should move slightly to the left.
Panel 3
This is my favorite one but Jenn is slightly too skinny.
Panel 4
This one is fine besides the fact that Jeff looks really creepy!

